please tell me what u think

by paramorluver163 Last updated 3 months ago

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what i'm i to do with out you what i'm i if i dont have you (i fell so empty inside, if i cant tell you that i love you (i dont feel the same without you, i just cant live without you.) (Every time i hear your voice it just kill me a little bit inside.) (oh , lord please just help me through this, just help me get through) this is a song im starting on please tell me what you think writen by: paramoreluver163

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Comments

barbieetfluver64, 3 months ago

its awsome i wish i was this creative.lol
whizzybunn, 4 months ago

I love it a lot!!!
paramorluver163(), 4 months ago

thanks u guys 4 the comment just remember im still workin on it
ekuchic19, 4 months ago

the song looks good but the only thing i see wrong is the first two lines where it says "what i'm i...." do you mean "what AM i...."??
xXRoCkErDuDeXx, 4 months ago

awsome
mizzy1219(Online), 4 months ago

whoa! i got tears on my eyes. i love this song your writing keep it going cus i can really relate to this song. =] 5 stars and its going to my fav.